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Registered Nurse, Medical-Surgical at Lakeside Medical Center

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Summary

4 of 6 requirements are supported by the resume as written, one needs an answer from the candidate, and one is not shown, so it stays out rather than being invented.

What the posting asks for

Active RN licence

Licences

Medical-surgical experience

Cedar, bullet 1

BLS and ACLS

Certifications

Precepting or charge experience

Cedar, bullets 2 and 3

Epic

Question

Telemetry certification

Not mentioned

No score. “Supported” names the sentence that supports it. “Not shown” means the resume says nothing about it, and neither will the tailored version.

The tailored summary

Registered nurse, four years on a 32-bed medical-surgical unit. Charge nurse two shifts a week, preceptor to six new graduates, BLS and ACLS current.

Each figure in this summary appears in a bullet below. The summary is assembled from them, not written over them.

Changes that matter

  • Original: Provided patient care on a busy unit.Rewritten: Cared for 5 to 6 patients a shift on a 32-bed medical-surgical unit, with charge duties two shifts a week.
    From your resumeWhy this changed: The posting asks for med-surg load and charge experience; both are in the resume.
    Source: “32-bed medical-surgical unit, 5 to 6 patients per shift; charge nurse two shifts a week since 2024.” Cedar, bullets 1 and 2.

    In your own application you choose: use this wording, edit it, or keep your original.

  • Original: Helped train new nurses.Rewritten: Precepted six new graduate nurses through their 12-week orientation.
    From your resumeWhy this changed: Precepting is named in the posting; the resume has the count and the length.
    Source: “Preceptor to six new graduate nurses (12-week orientation each).” Cedar, bullet 3.

    In your own application you choose: use this wording, edit it, or keep your original.

  • Original: Served on the holiday party committee.Left out.
    Left outWhy this changed: Not relevant to the posting.
    Source: “Served on the holiday party committee.” Cedar, bullet 6.

    In your own application you can keep this line in.

The rewrite we rejected

  • Rejected suggestion: Managed the unit as charge nurse.Charge nurse two shifts a week since 2024.
    Rejected, original keptWhy it was rejected: Charge duties two shifts a week is what the resume says; managing the unit full time is more. Checked against Cedar, bullet 2.

The first draft proposed the struck line. The check found the resume does not support that level of ownership, reverted to the original wording, and shows you both so you know what was declined.

The one question we asked

Needs your answer: EpicThe posting names Epic. Your resume does not name the charting system. Which one did you use? Describe it, or leave this out.

An answer goes in as a bullet labelled “added by you”. Leave it blank and the resume says nothing about it. There is no checkbox that approves a claim on your behalf.

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