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Data Analyst, Growth at Pinecrest

Hannah Okafor's resume, tailored

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Summary

4 of 6 requirements are supported by the resume as written, one needs an answer from the candidate, and one is not shown, so it stays out rather than being invented.

What the posting asks for

SQL every day

Supported

Skills; Vale, bullet 1

A BI tool (Looker, Tableau or similar)

Supported

Vale, bullet 1

dbt or a modelling layer

Supported

Vale, bullet 2

Experiment analysis

Supported

Vale, bullet 4

Python for analysis

Needs your answer

Question

Marketing attribution models

Not shown

Not mentioned

No score. “Supported” names the sentence that supports it. “Not shown” means the resume says nothing about it, and neither will the tailored version.

The tailored summary

Data analyst, three years in SQL, dbt and Looker. Built the retention dashboard used by 40 people weekly and found the pricing-page leak behind a 9% drop in trials.

Each figure in this summary appears in a bullet below. The summary is assembled from them, not written over them.

Changes that matter

  • Original: Built dashboards for the business.Rewritten: Built the retention dashboard in Looker on dbt models, used by 40 people every week.
    From your resumeWhy this changed: The posting names Looker and dbt; the resume has both and the adoption figure.
    Source: “Built the weekly retention dashboard (Looker on dbt models), used by 40 people a week.” Vale, bullet 1.

    In your own application you choose: use this wording, edit it, or keep your original.

  • Original: Looked into why trials dropped.Rewritten: Traced a 9% drop in trial sign-ups to a broken pricing-page variant within two days, using the event data in Snowflake.
    From your resumeWhy this changed: The posting wants investigation with an outcome; the resume states one.
    Source: “Found the broken pricing-page variant behind a 9% drop in trial sign-ups within two days (Snowflake event data).” Vale, bullet 3.

    In your own application you choose: use this wording, edit it, or keep your original.

  • Original: Ordered team lunches for the monthly review.Left out.
    Left outWhy this changed: Not relevant. Keep it in if you want it.
    Source: “Ordered team lunches for the monthly review.” Vale, bullet 6.

    In your own application you can keep this line in.

The rewrite we rejected

  • Rejected suggestion: Designed and ran the A/B testing program.Analysed A/B tests set up by the growth team and reported results.
    Rejected, original keptWhy it was rejected: Analysing tests is not designing the program; the resume says the growth team set them up. Checked against Vale, bullet 4.

The first draft proposed the struck line. The check found the resume does not support that level of ownership, reverted to the original wording, and shows you both so you know what was declined.

The one question we asked

Needs your answer: Python for analysisThe posting asks for Python. Your resume lists SQL and dbt only. Have you used Python for analysis, even in notebooks? Describe what you did, or leave this out.

An answer goes in as a bullet labelled “added by you”. Leave it blank and the resume says nothing about it. There is no checkbox that approves a claim on your behalf.

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